Lord Anzius

thanks :D

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Thaks :D

sure

No, the story is further than the script :P

I haven't read that book. But I'm trying to have about the same effect.

Yes it does. Thanks

Thanks :D

sorry there was a mistake in the spelling. =P

Hipty hopping is the same as skipping but in a more child like manner. =P

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Hmm :? The new ending doesn't rime as well as the last one. But then again it makes the poem even more dramatic. In that sense it is a good ...

I edited it now

THX :D

Ok. I'll change a few things in the story. Thx for the crit guys. But I must say that the main character is a boy, and the human like figure ...